Nitin
Wow! Very dark and deep thoughts went into this poem. Great imagery. I love reading your poems. Closing my eyes after reading this piece so many things run through my mind. Great poetry can be seen in the mind and you have done this with this write.

Climb the highest mountain, just to fall again
Stare at sun with naked eyes till you go insane
Bang your head on wall until it screams in pain
Hear again, dont let these whispers go invain

Loved the ending.
Love your friend Cindy

That was such a good poem, the words u used were jsut great powerful poem xx

Woow ,mind blowing , i really dont have words of how i am feeling after reading it.So dark and yet true ,we all feel the mystery of life after death.Brillaint piece.

Take care
chavii.

A very dark reality poem. The imagery was intense. Great write.

What a very deep dark poem Nitin....love the feel of the whole piece.....the opposites of sleep and wake... rainbow and grey....dark and day...climb and fall...all of it. Very well done. Excellent! 5/5 Debbie

Wow i lov it fantasic imagery, its really well done! and ur introduction is a great idea to this piece also, great job

Your desciptions had, vividly, painted a horrifying imagery that which is making me shudder at the thought of it. I was enchanted by this piece, nevertheless. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
Love,
Debbie

Wow. This was intense. Very well described. And definately dark. Lol. I did enjoy reading it though. Don't think I' ve read something Like this before. Never stop!! 5/5

` Liz =]

Great job, I loved the whole thing..very intense and definately draws you in. Best wishes.

Great dark poem my friend. You do have away with your words. All the best to you 5/5

This was awesome. I read it and then re-read it and in my head I kept hearing it as a song. Thrash Metal perhaps. This was amazing, it would be a great song if it were. I loved the descriptions and contrast in the verse. Dark but not overly morbid.
Dixie

I love it.

Powerful song with strong words... I just love it!