Comments : Your Return

  • 17 years ago

    by kiara

    I just loved this it was short but i could feel all the emotion and between you and me id rather read short poems :)

    For thee I would
    Give everything to if I only could

    these two lines stand out to me so much especially the last
    'if i only could' that was breath taking
    luved it...kiara

  • 17 years ago

    by bbyA

    Hi speedY gonzales i love everything yoO write!!