Bonnie
This write kepy my attention from beginning to end. Nice job!

And thus, the battle of evil and good commenced
A war between father and son
They become each others adversaries
And the battle still wages on

How true this ending is.
Take Care Cindy

Wow , how can i tell you how touchy was this poem, greatly written. I like the idea of evil and good, between them we suffer,lol
keep it up

WOW! Dark & deep ur style
opposite 2 u always smiling n a great fwend
i luvd da poem real real dark
creatd a real dark mood
well now i'm done deconstructin ur poem! LOL!
All 2geda awesum!
Luv ya

I really liked the ideas of this poem. It was very unique and creative. A masterpeice. You have talent.
<3Raych

thanks for commenting on my poem.

You've done well. I know you've touch souls with this lovely work, keep it up.

Its a wonderful poem, very carefully written, liek you said its just ideas, i myself write many ideas but i may not believe or feel myself, its all in the imagination as such. but a great piece my dear, keep it up hon. xox lithium

I'VE ADDED YOU TO MY FAVOURITE POETS LIST !!

THIS IS AN ANOTHER AWESOME PIECE.
5/5 AGAIN !!

Wow, this poem is so powerful, I love the topic and the whole message of it. Choice of words is superb and I like every stanza, whole poem is excellently written.
5/5 from me, well done

Great poem, subject is excellent and you wrote this superbly. Title is amazing, first stanza is my favorite one. Unique and deep poem.
Messages of your poems are incredibly good.

Good form and rhyme.