Ohhh I have tears in my eyes..
This was so heatbreaking, yet you managed to write about this tragic story with flair.
The flow is flawless, imagery wonderfully done, and I thought the ending had great impact.

Sad and beautiful...

*isabel*

Omg that was such a sad write. very touching piece.. very well written gem. xx

Gem
This is so sad...I can't say anything else...sorry.

Love Cindy

Oh dear thats such a sad write, knowing the poem is true makes it even more sadder.You have justified the poem with your heartfelt words.Death of loved ones can leave deepest scars, few can never overcome and few doesn choose to live.

Take care
chavii.

Gem.... wow.
That was heartbreaking & the fact that it's a true story makes it sadder. =[
The flow was flawless, the emotions were strong, and the word usage was great.
Overall, fantastic job hun! Keep writing. =]
5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Its sad when it happends but sometimes the pain is too great to bean and we forget that if the memory is there then the person is trully never gone :) its a touching poem Gem thank you for writing it :) 99/5

This was so sad to read and then when I got to the bottom and read it was a true story I got a chill.
How awful.

Oh wow, I have shivers. And they're still going! This reminds me of someone I knew so I'm nearly crying; well I was nearly crying near the middle but than reading it was a true story was just sad. I really like this poem, you displayed your talent well. Keep up the work and I will kep reading. ^_^

This is real sad. It reminds me of my friend. He lost his wife at his wedding. SHe left him for his best man. So he was devasted. But he hasn't did nothing stupid. He just holds her favorite bear at night (SHe left it over at his house). Great poem. 5/5
-vino

This is... heartbreakingly sad. Reading this piece made me feel something heartrending in my chest. Perhaps God has a better plan for those couple; however, their lives ended drastically.
I hope they rest in peace.
all the best and take care.
Love,
Debbie

That's...sad. You know what the hardest part for me is, is that that is a true story...for more than one person. Except...my friend committed suicide, then another friend got into a car crash (the opposite from yours) I'm just making sure that my really close friend (who was a friend of both of these) doesn't do anything...stupid. Wonderful poem...may all of those lost to us on Earth, Rest in Peace wherever they may find their sanctuary.

~~Rikki, aka SSS~~

R.I.P. Jack and Jake

Thats some straight up stuff right there!!!
Your poem is one that has touched me because life is all about these sort of things it's not fair but it happens.
I'm really happy to read this kind of art you did a really good job :)

Very well written, excellent flow, extremly moving 5/5

Hey thts realy gd! proper hits ther rite place! touchin stuff well done!!!

This is a beautiful poem...so much emotion in it....i hope this wasn't a true story..but if it was..i feel terrible for the guy

Best wishes
Love my fellow poet
~shannon~
~Missing everything we had, everything we felt, and what use to be~

P.S. if you get the chance..read a couple of my poems
thanks!

Your poem is awesome

How sad....sometimes there are worse things than death...

Understand why this is his choice
And it's what he needs to do
Now that his beautiful wife has left him
Life's just too cold and blue

Good job on this heartbreaking subject! All the best, Debbie

Wow that's sad...I hope this actually didn't happen to you.

Wow one of the best poems I have read and it brought tears running down my cheeks. Babe wow I dont know what to say, that was so amazing.
Thank you for the comments you sent me, your right everyone does go through the friend thing and it does hurt and over time sometimes you mend and well the wish thing thay is just another story. But wow keep the good work up.
5/5
lots of love
Chelsea