Comments : The Library

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Wonderful poem and an awesome idea...
    i love books...=)
    i agree the most with the part:
    "to ignore them is considered a crime",
    i know many people that don't like to read, only play computer games and so on and i feel sick when i hear them say it...

    keep on writing

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Great write Alyson. I think if you shortened the lasy line to "how it feels only I understand" it would flow nicely at the end. I lived in the library and I love to read, I thought it was a great suject. Nice work and thanks for your comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I loved the starting the most. the perfect descritption to make the reader interested in reading more. and this worked on me.

    well done. 5/5 David