Comments : My last farewell

  • 14 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Our love, it can never be brought back to life.
    So alone, I die, because our love is just a shell.
    I found you in the darkness, yet now you've found the light,
    so to you I give this...
    my last farewell.

    I loved the ending..I really didn't think the flow was any good...But wording of amazing...Overall 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Amzing poem love, it was so into depth as well as capturative. i agree with the person above, the last stanza was my favorite.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lozbi

    The ending of this is realli realli great!
    i like the style of the poem.. vry well put 2getha..
    keep up the fab work