Very nicely done! You had great use of words and the flow of the poem was wonderful! Keep up the great work. You're one of my favorite poets. :D
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Ah, love is no abstract art in this excellent piece!
A brilliant write with immense description of love. Excellent use of imagery and emotive language, you explore the depths of this emotion effectively.

“Enclosed love surges through passionate veins
Swiftly transformed into fervent rage”

^For a fourteen year old to write so powerfully, I applaud you :).
Very well done :).

I love ur choices of words, its so powerful spoken and yet it touches me!! good job keep it up.. ur a talented writer don't ever forget that! good job 5/5

Wow.. That is truely an amazing poem. The flow is great, your word choice.. just superb. It really made this poem what it is. It describes this love/hate type relationship so well. I'm sure many people can relate to this, including myself. Very well done Jessy =] You have lots of talent hun. 5/5

Tammie xo

Vocabulary was advance and nice and compatible and i liked the flow..it keeps you going
Beatifully penned
Keep it up
Laura

Again another Amazing poem. I love your word choice. The flow was really nice. well done. 5/5

~Chelsea

This is another good one by you,
you have a wonderful talent with words that is why you can write great.

Jeez woman, your so discriptive!! I wish i could be like that. lol. I liked this poem. Your such a great writer. Keep up the amazing work!! Xx Chrissie

Thats a bit different from passed poems that ive read. great job though. it was very capturing and quite interesting. 5/5 love.

Wow. Very powerful, quite deep, and a nicely penned poem. A few of the lines left me a bit confused, but it was beautiful nonetheless.

This poem had a very nice flow and rhyme scheme. An inspirational love poem! Shows that hanging on to the one you love is worth it, and that you can never really hate the one you love.

This is pretty good. Great use of vocabulary. :]

Awww your poems are really good! I loved this one! it was one of the best I've read today!

Aah. Once again, very bittersweet. It was confusing at times and the flow was a little off, but nothing too bad.

5.5
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