Beautiful...

*isabel*

It a really good poem but yet so touching.. I love the word choices good job but....it feels like it needs something to it though... even though You are a GREAT writer.. Im gonna let you figure out how to change your poems.. to become THE BEST.. kay well gl and keep up the good work!! 4/5

Great poem, very touching, flowed well. Keep it up!!

I think it's really cute, and short. I love poems that are cute and short. :D
I didn't like you did # 1 instead of number one, but oh well. :/ Just my thoughts.

Good Job. Keep it up.

Oohhh.. Love poems are so cute ^^

It was good, u know, but it wasn't like a WOW poem...
4/5
***aLy***