BEAUIFULLY WRITTEN, so emotional.

Brillent work keep writing

WiLd RoSe

Please comment on mine thanks

This is awesome usaully i like dark and depressing poems more than love ones but i liked this one more than the other one i read good job this flowed super well

keenan

That is so cute, I wish I had some one like that except I am only 14 so I can't get married my parents won't allow it.

It was awesome it is the perfect love poem

I love this poem! It is beautifully writen. If you were to give this to some girl, I am sure that she would love you forever! Keep up the writing!

Thank you for commenting on my poems! I appreciate it alot!

Hey darl great poem. very well written thank u for the comment on my poem. meant alot. xx

Beautiful poem of love. Great job!

For in my heart
That's where I want you to be
So tonight I ask you
Will you marry me?

Loved your ending
Take Care Cindy

This poem is so good.
i love it!

Wallace, its really wonderful to know someone writing so nicely at such a tender age. But from your poems it appears you do have a mature mind, perhaps more mature than me.I have read some of your poems, and will continue doing so.
Cheers.

This is a very good poem wallace, nice flow, i notice that you write different types of poems instead of a couple like everyone else, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up man!!!

Wow really romantic really well written!!!!

Very beautiful and full of love.
Keep it up.

This was a very sweet poem Wallace, and thank-you very much for the comment :) I can see you have some great potential here. If you ever want one of your poems truly critqued, feel free to private message it to me:) Keep writing!
Kim

Wow, Tht is reli gd, it was so sweet and it is so full of luv.
keep up the gd wrk. xx

THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT YOU LEFT ME I LOVE THIS ONE YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED PERSON GOOD LUCK LOVE THIS POEM

Hey,
thats one beautiful written piece! very emotional, and sweet. i like the ending part with will you marry me? so cute =)
kisses stephanie

Great job so emotional i really liked it keep up the great work

sucidalbrownie