Comments : Christmas Eve

  • 17 years ago

    by April McLaren

    This poem is excellent it is really good for the kids keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Hey this poem was excellent. it was flawless. to an extent. your only 14 and you can write like this? you have some pretty special talent.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Soooo cute!
    I love poems like this, when the tone is happy and the flow is flawless.
    Excellent little piece =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Psycho93

    Wow great poem!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    I have never read a christmas poem and I truly loved yours! Great job, and you have succeeded in making me smile today. Your ryhming was good as well, so I just would like to say, 5/5!

    Hatori
    Thanks for the R/R/C's on my poems!

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Haha, aweh! Cute. It made me smile haha, I really liked the way that you ended the poem, it really brought it all together. =)

    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was a great poem. Very nicely written.

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    It's sweet.
    thanks for commenting mine.
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 excellent poem. its so cute. it really camptures the moment of Christmas. im glad i read it. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    Aw so cute! I wanted to write a poem about Christmas, but I just couldn't figure out what to say.....You did though! Bravo! I think I'm best at writing sad poems hahaha.

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    I love it! You should rite one on Wallace and gromet lol. This was sooo cute!