Comments : My Wishes and Dreams

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    This was a really good poem because it was short but descriptive.

    "Wishing, praying, thinking
    Hoping, dreaming, crying
    Wanting you more than anything
    And regretting you aren't here"

    I could really feel the emotion in this stanza. The deep desire to want someone to be there and then feeling disappointed when you realise there not there. Great write! :]

    Take Care,
    Bonnie
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