Overall. This was good.

=]

Few things:

reals - real
lieing- lying
(SPELLCHECKER! =])

i think you need some more punctuation thoughout this poem. like ...'s and commas in the begining. and there should be spaces after the commas. =]

get rid of the double spacing!!! ahh that is so annoying!! (sorry but its true!)

but overalli really liked this poem. i feel teh same way soo much. i want to eff myself up and die..

but things get better. remember that. keep your chin up. =]

x.o Lola

Awwwww i like this poem very good i feel the same lol =)