I like this one. very strong and it has lots of meaning.

Heh.. u have talent.. lots of it.. again.. very good and "out of the patterns" structure
what can i say, nice one indeed.

I like the line...
"Live life for yourself and someone else."
Its true, plus we need at least one person to get through life.
And sucides does often leave many loved ones feeling guilty/ sad.

This is very good i like this alot....thanx for commenting my poem means alot to me xoxox