Absoluty, one of the most amazing pieces of poetry I've read in a while. This is emotionally connects to the soul and its and experience I don't want to forget. I look forward to reading more Poems! keep it up, This was mind blowing!

Hey i have to say first, the heading rocked! it really made me intruiged wat this poem was going to be about. i have to give you 5/5 for just the title. lol.

well done on the poem tho. very thought out and meaningful. so dark and inviting. in a way.

5/5 David