I like the fact that there is actual honesty in this poem.

"You take my breath away"

Loved that line. It really stood out to me. Its amazing what true love can do to us. Taking our breath away. It was definetly one of the lines that contained a feeling of strength behind it.

Hope everything works out for you too.
Take Care,
Bonnie
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Good i get what your saying this poem keeps it simple i like that, the reader can understand your point and apprecite it