Comments : What is This?

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh its love all right. i know you. and thru this poem i am right in saying it is trully love.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Okay, I must admit. The poem is a bit messy. You could have you used better structure to your poem. The flow was rocky and it is a fixer upper. It just needs a bit of work. Try to have the closest amount of sylables in each lines. Don't take it seriously, just advice. Other than that, it's a cute poem. I don't really read internet slang, but this was cute. But unfortunatly it's not great, just good, so I'll have to give you a 4/5.
    God Bless
    <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Yes, my friend, it is love lol. I loved the flow of this and the ending was good, in my opinion. To me its good the way it is. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Interestin write.
    just remember this "everything happens for a reason"

  • 17 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    I've felt this way so many times. Great job at getting your emotions through. It really shows. 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, this was more of a sad sort of love poem, sort of like, a confusion. Which is what this poem is about. Being confused about love! I didn't really like the title because it sort of ruined the element of surpised. It was easy to guess what this poem was about. I think you should change the title, and leave the last line to ask the question. It's totally up to you though. Good job on this one though.

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Loved this poem...
    it's beautiful...

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Nice poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Well done very good i agree wit^^^all off them 5-5

  • 17 years ago

    by Amy Hernandez

    .. agreed.

  • 17 years ago

    by In love honey 1

    I love is poem I think that it has a great massge to it. I also think that it shows how you my not now if your feelings for someone are ture.

  • 17 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    Wow...this is really good poem, but this is how I feel. my opinion is there is no love. yeah...good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by holly

    Pretty, it speaks

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    It could use editing, yes . Was it bad? No . The feeling that is felt in the poem is right there; it speaks to you . I`m not a fan of this poem, but it was good .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw this poem is so sweet, and yeah thats definatly love.. or it could be a really strong crush im not to sure. Whatever it is.. I really liked the poem idea, VERY creative you got a lot out there without having to say very much. Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Not bad though I do thin kthat it could be better if you were to work on it a little. Keep up the great work. 4/5