Cute! 5/5!
Jessica

It was kinda funny 4/5 but i liked it. thanks for the comments

There is a poem thats almost exactly like this one that i have read. maybe you should try changing it up a bit. also i think you should try to make your rhymes not seem so forced. anyway 3/5.

Not all that bad, but it would have been better if you kept the flow on track all the way to the end.

'Twas a cute write. If I may suggest, maybe applying a specific metre and/or rhyme scheme will enhance the poem's flow? =]
An adorable poem it is, nevertheless.
Thanks for sharing.

Haha this is cute. up until you said it was gum, i wasnt sure what it was going to be about!

Cute read. Flow was a little off, but nicely written. keep it up, you will only get betterin time.Good job.

I liked it. lol. 5/5

DAMN u had me thinking lolz
but its just gum lolz