You explain your style in this poem.
It's almost like you're talking to your readers
And explaining how you feel
And what you're thinking.
I can't relate to this
So to me, it seems kind of dry.
But it's just me :]

Aww.. this is adorable.. the description if wonderful and you really let the reader know how you feel.. all in all you just chose the perferct jumble of words to create this poem... the ending was strong without overpowering the rest of the poem.. a very enjoyable read.. great job :D

Yet again another wonderfully written poem by a great poet. I loved the flow and your word choice. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

That was great really sweet.

Still great good jop