Aww, your poems are so very sad. But there is a lot of real, raw emotions in them, and they are really well written, however, I don't like knowing you are really feeling this!..

Cheer up hun!..
*hugs*

This is another great poem. You always put a lot of emotion into your poems. 5/5

Kalee

This is good upbuilding for those who think there's no hope in life. I liked it! Even though it does not refer to me, but hey, sooner or later it can. right? things can happen lol. 5/5

P.s: thanks, it was forced huh? lol i couldn't stop laughing but i just needed to write it out somehow. oh well. thnks for telling me what you thought about it. i really do appreciate it.

Oh yeah! it's sort of like my poem... try read it.. it's called "Over you"

Exactly i do have to agree with you on that. Just tonight, my father and brother got into a car crash, but they weren't seriously hurt, but the lesson i learned is that, reality is always there, and even thought i thought that could never happen to us, well, think again.

True reality is just too harsh.... don't you wish that you can just end it? and you know exactly how to end it, but you won't do it because as soon as you do it, you won't ever wake up again. Then again, why would you want to ever wake up to this mess anyway right? ....and i can't believe we're talking through comments.. lol.

It's so good to know that there is someone out there that thinks life is worth living. and i am sure there are more, but as for myself, right now, is a road bump for me and I know that i will get over it. it will pass, right? and then i can be happy again with my big happy family.

*smiles* just like what your poem said! thank you... i'll do my best. i am happy for you as well.... *looks at time* it is pretty late here.... let's talk again tomorrow or whenever alright!? goodnight! oh yeah it was lovely meeting you. =)

Good poem, but you use "..." symbols a little too much in your writing. try to work on that.

Excellent!!
It really flowed well. Everyone should read this, very inspirational. Keep it up!! 5/5

Wow...i love it ...absolutely amazing...thanks for the comment on my poem!

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