Wow, this was an interesting poem. Confusing, but it really makes me think, and try to imagine it!.. Kind of like a weird nightmare. Good job on this one..

P.S.
You picked out my favourite line on my poem!.. Good job! :)

W0w!
While reading this, a chill was sent up my spine. The descriptions were vivid & the flow was great. Wonderful job hun, keep writing! 5/5

"It's not really evil at all;
I made a really bad judgement call."
^I love those lines! They're my favorite!

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I have to say I didn't like this one as much, a lot of the rhyming sounds forced, and the flow is terribly off at a few points. 4/5

I liked it even though i got a little confused in some places. Was this a dream you had or are you trying to describe an event that happened in your life. oh, and try not to force your rhymes so much. other than that, it was pretty good.

cesar