This was a really sad poem, however. This belongs under the explicit poem section. There is a category for this sort of poem.

This is truely terrible, and I am so stunned everytime I read a poem like this. There are some guys with no class at all. This world is a cruel place. *sigh*

Very well written though.

No, no.. I was not assuming you cut yourself. I was just stating that you seem to have gone through a lot of things, because most of your poems are pretty sad.

You are a very talented poet, and you seem like a really sweet person :)

Good poem. The flow was excellent and the emotion was shown.
If this really happened, I'm sorry you had to go through it.
Overall, good poem. 5/5

|Sarah|

Why thank you very much hun, I'm glad you enjoy my poetry :)

From what I have read, you have talent, and I shall read some more of your poetry soon.

Haha, sorry.. I never change it..
it's just too much of a hassle, and I don't really use it much anymore..

The poem was great, if you went though it then you have alot of courage and it is good thing you are able to talk about it. anyway the emtion was strong and it flowed nicely
keep it up

This was a very powerful poem, a good way to express what your feeling and whats going on in the world. Some guys are just really really dumb. Wish you the best!! 5/5

Wow, im sorry. ive been molested and its horrible that there are ppl out there that would do that.

this was a strong write and the ending was perfectly written. i absolutely can relate to this and the scheme was executed perfectly.

love ya lots,
sore

Omg! that is horrible. some ppl are just idiots.
but anyways well-written, good job. did this
really happen to you?

This is a good poem and I'm sure there are many people out there that read that poem know that they are not the only ones who went through what they did Damn Gurl I guess you just making the world a better place lol
Much Love!

Omg it was so sad. i hope your ok. 5/5 the flow was great the structure was perfect and the words you used were just perfect. great poem

Aww.. this was so beautifully sad, and that poem was so beautifully horrible, I loved it... I loved the ending too... I loved it!!!
5/5...

Another great poem I loved how you lead the reader to every line, done with persision and great detail good job on the piece, but hopeful you don't have to go through that in real life I know some have no choice Plot121