This was a fine piece of work. Though it wasn't well-organized in its structure, I still thought it was rather written well but nevertheless it could be improved in some ways which could make a tremendous difference from what it is currently. Don't get me wrong, it is all right.
overall, a nice write. keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
Debbie

Nice job keep up the good work

This one is full emotion. I can definately relate. Only time heals wounds!

An excellent write ,you never forget a love but time is a healer and in time you gain the strength to move on.