Wow great descpition i loved it 5/5

Great flow it looks professional

Debbie
You do such an amazing job on the formed poetry. Something I have never tried. Rhyme and flow are great.

Excellent job!
take Care Cindy

Bloody brilliant!
I don't have the guts to try a monorhyme yet! lol
You pull it off so beautifully, your language is always amazing.
Plus, melody is one of my fave words, =)
5/5
*Gem*

Great I can see how hard you have tried to make the poem monorhymic and 99 % you have succeeded. Well written and its really enjoyable to reat. Tc thanks for sharing

With love
Fsams