Comments : If I Can Do It, So Can You

  • 12 years ago

    by Br0k3n

    The poem is great & I'm really glad you gave up. That's a huge step forward. Stay for good :)
    ~Br0k3n

  • 12 years ago

    by Polly

    This is really good, I love reading something inspirational as well as kinda sad, and it's got a great rhythm that keeps it all going :-)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dead Inside

    Really beautiful. The poem flows so well. I love your diction and your style. I know how that feels :( Great job!

    cesar

  • 12 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Wow its just like me. i beg the person whos helping me plz one tiny cut u wont be able to see. when i grab my blade my arms shake in fear cause it would be my final goodbye and theres so much i want to say. my friend found out and said if i was to never cut then she'd stop smoking but i dont know what todo i want to cut and i want to save her from cancer

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenie

    I pull my hair and cry
    I need to fight this
    Otherwise I will die
    Because I can't resist

    only 4 lines...and sooooo strong!!!!! i can just picture u sitting there lost..like i once used to be...until u came along and saved me :)

    babe this poem was amazing!!!!
    thanx u for all my poem comments :)
    ...love him?....hhm...im sooo scared to say yes jst bc that means ive fallen in love THREE times in only threes years and i would hate to be one of thoes nieve girls who "say"they love evey bf...but i dono yet...ill let u no hahaha
    anways!!
    i love u so much sis!!!!
    im sooo proud of u for ur 8 months!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey hunny,
    I chose this poem to win the club's poetry contest, for the self harm catagorie. I chose this poem because I felt it was a really great inspirational read. I know self harm is something that many feel you can never actually stop doing as it is a method of coping. Yet you have stopped and wrote an inspiring message for us all, I think it’ll help so many of us out there. I thought the overall poem, had an excellent flow and the rhyming was good. There was emotion in there that we all can relate to. So congratulations! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    Absolutely amazing poem. i love it. i wrote one kind of like it in november, but then i lost it and did it again. i'm tryin really hard again to stop. im trying to figure out who i am and everything. good job in stopping...i am behind you 100% good luck hun...keep it goin. if you ever need to talk just send me a personal message or something!...great job again!

  • 12 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I really like this poem, and being a cutter. I can relate 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I'm proud of you girl, I really am, thought I come back to check on you guys, well, it's really awesome...btw, there's something I wanna tell you...You're a happy girl, you're intelligent, you're important, you're calm, you're priceless...=)...princess?

  • 12 years ago

    by kia

    Very inspiring. Nicely written! good flow!