I could see this being a new famous song I could see it playing on the radio. Thanks for your comment on "Dinner on the run"

This was really sweet man, I got the flow down in my head and it was awesome. You did a nice job with this one 5/5 for sure. an I'll keep it that way lmao me 2

Lol, i loved the ending, i thought it was leading up to the 'guy gets the girl' scenario but you fooled me =)
Excellent song
5/5
*Gem*

Very good. Nice rhyme scheme and good plot. well done. 5/5

Thats mad as ur a real male lol i like it i wish all males would just b ya friend but that ant happen cause this earthwould end lol mwa mwa mwa mwa keep beingya self

I love it! i ca't wait til this song comes out.... lol

I love it!!! Its amazing! I wish I had the flow to write songs and poems!!! I'll keep trying though!(Even if I fail...lol)

Lol loved the song
it made me laugh*~*

and you

had a very nice twist to the end!
----tara

Lol, amazing, i found that quite funny. I'm not really into country music, but that was very interesting, excellent write.

Lol...i just loved this 1......very well written..i dnt read much of this type though...but htis 1 kept me reading till the end...kp writing!
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

Lol... i thank you on behalf of the female sex... but i loved it...lol

I love the flow it really nice and I was singing it " nice song "

I love the flow it really nice and I was singing it " nice song "

I love the flow it really nice and I was singing it " nice song "