Great poem!! your poems are really good!! keep it up!! ya ya ya this is coming from a 13 year old but you know what i love this poem!! so ya keep it up! hope to see more on here!!
-breann

Very different piece. good rhyming...unusually written with the way you worded it and the thoughts behind it. Good job!
Charisma*
P.S. thanks for your comment!

This is really really amazing.
Keep it up youre good.
<3jess