Awesome read and great job keep up the good work

Wow, wonderful words to use!
The flow was great!
You have a talent with these.
It's not easy to write these but you
nailed it! God bless 5/5
<3Tayy

I read it twice because it was a little confusing, But It was well written and an amazing use of words.
Great job.

xox

Excellent use of vocab sweets. It's almost got a magical type feel to it.
I take this is about a friend called Jeanne?
Beautifully done
5/5
*Gem*

(How come you're other account is no more? =/)

Debbie
I always enjoy your formed poetry. This one is beautiful :) Great imagery and word choices.
Take Care Cindy

Need not to fret nor be disturbed, my friend.
Even points of perpetuity we shall transcend...

Beautiful lines for a friend. How glad Jeanne would be reading this wonderful piece. The wordings are outstanding in this poem. You have very well penned. Max ratings. :)

Awesome poem your friend must be some gal lol good job and thx for the comment:):)

keenan