Its fictional yet it feels so real, flow is good,nicely penned.
Enjoyed reading it.

Take care
chavii.

"You know I'll always love you
I promise it from the start
No matter what happens with 'us'
You'll always be in my heart"
this stanza is beautifull i only hope for as much :( 99/5

"It's with a heavy heart
I am writing this to you
But under the circumstances
I have no choice but to.."

I love the opening stanza... It was rather sentimental and emotive, whereas it's a fictional write. =] Well done upon writing such a fine work. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
Love,
Debbie

This was so beautiful...
Such a great opener with each stanza getting better and better.
The flow was good throughout and I liked the depth and emotion behind the words.

If only they would understand that even when we send those very letters, we still love them.

nice one.

~~Rikki, aka SSS~~

Loved it! i cant believe its fictional tho cause it has so much feeling and depth to it! you are a really great poet. i have been reading some of your other work too and they are all such beautiful pieces of work! a beautiful collection! they are very inspiring and all so beautifully written! xXx

Nice job :) Sometimes our hearts tell us it is time to move on.

Maybe we'll get another chance
To be together some day
After we've grown up a bit
And lived life our own way

I really liked this stanza Gem.
Love Cindy

Maybe fictional for you but almost inspiring to others. I mean in terms of offering advice. We follow our hearts blindly and sometimes we just have to stop and back off.

I can't believe I just said that.
Great poem.

Maybe we'll get another chance
To be together some day
After we've grown up a bit
And lived life our own way

I really like this stanza, it is my favorite, gives me that "wow been there done that" feeling lol Very relateable piece.