"I've torn myself in two,
I was shattered to the core,
To only see you happy,
For to me that did mean more"

Sadly, that's the stupid things we do for the person we love..
I know i do it and i can't even begin to think of a day when he might not be there, i don't like thinking about it.
But this poem is so full of the raw emotions of a break up.. it's well written
5/5
*Gem*

Oh my, this is so bloody true.
I can relate to this poem too, just goes to show what other people do to us, & cos of love we choose to ignore it.
that was well written tho.

&& no spelling errors :P haha
Jen x

Wow...i can feel your pain believe me bro...and i think what you said is 100% about the "i love you"

Wow man do I relate to this very much and it hurt bad when someone u love just up and walks away and I feel the love and pain here great poem and 5/5 all the way and thank you for the comment on my poem HAPPY BIRTHDAY it ment alot to me ....

:(