This is good. Although I kind of feel as if it just ends kinda randomly. But its good. Good writing. Keep it up!

I feel like that alot...

"this time i cant say no....

i feel my skin rip, my nerves scream out...."

^^ I love those lines!! Aaahh! So emotionally written..... Your vocab. was great & the flow was flawless. Wonderfully written, you're a great writer! Keep it up! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

This poem is really good, you should rad some of mine, they pretty much rel;ate to yours....well i give u a 5/5...

Its really good..sorry its taken me so long to get on here..love ur poems

Wow! this is good.. I had a vivid visual of the poem.

Powerful poem, flows really well. full of great emotion i can relate to. well done, luv ur work