Comments : I Look Like Death

  • 17 years ago

    by TWiStEDxElAGANCE

    OOHHH MY GODD i l0VE THiS iTS DEFFiNATlY 0NE OF MY FAVORiTS <3

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey,
    I chose this poem as the winner of the clubs poetry contest. Congratulations! :)
    I chose this poem for the Eating Disorder category because I loved how you described yourself as looking like death. The overall poem has a sense of death over it, and this personally reminds me that those with eating disorders may die. I loved the flow of the poem; I really enjoyed the usage of repetition, especially in the fourth stanza. The fourth stanza also seemed to me like she was pleading for help. Very emotional read. Congratulations CHOKE!