Comments : Unloving Pleasure

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    The imagery in this poem just blows my mind! Especially:
    Echo of darkness screaming in my soul
    Sends shivers down my spine.
    The loneliness that consumes my dark skies
    Unloving pleasure is all I know, black blanket of lust
    Sinful winds smearing tears of shame

    Great JOB Jenn! 5/5 keep up the good work. -Unattractive1

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Don't ever change your writing style, keep it short and good as usual. You have lovely poems.