Love suckz lol thtz really gud xox

Hey this was excellent. might want to take away the ' in this poem. but the message. the effect. the love! it was imense.

5/5 David

The last line was much too long . It threw off the whole thing . The flow was a bit rocky , and I suggest editing, but overall, it was good . (Sry, I really don`t know what to say xD)

..__MiNDYY

Aww.. this is cute.. the idea is cliche but you did a nice job.. short and simple words but still you managed to capture you feelings and explode with a sweet and strong I LOVE YOU! at the end.. it was a nice touch.. nice job :D

...what a bittersweet piece... I always adore neat poems which use simple word choices, yet gives off a pleasant effect towards the reader. This is no exception.

"All I want to do is cry
Cry because I love you
But you dont love me"
^This could have been better illustrated if it was shown rather than told.

"I have tried to forget you
But that made my feelings for you grow"
^I can correlate with those lines thoroughly. (The harder I tried to forget, the stronger my feelings grow.)

Overall, it's a nicely-written love poem. Adorable to say the least. Keep on writing. Good effort. ~Debbie

Hey sweety..
coolie poem... real cute and sweet...

hope ur k love!!!
ive done 2 new poems could u read n tell me what u think
xhxx

I love this poem it shose how long I was looke to say that to someone that I love and now I have found that someone to say that to.
sinserly
In love 636

I really like this poem it is vary nice