Ohmygosh! thats sooo cute i love ittt! definatley the same thing im going through =]

That was a very cute poem. I like how you describe how she is and everything. keep it up! 5/5

Thanks. This piece was rather endearing to read. It reveals a saccharine soul within you, and it seems to me that both of you are blessed to have each other.
'Tis a delightful work. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
Marian

Nice poem, very nicely written
you are a talented writer and keep up the great job.

I loved this poem. Its so beautiful and completely shows how much emotion is held for "her". Very good.