Comments : Steps of Time

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Oh I thought this was about you haha. Aweh Darling, it's such a sad poem, but sweet that you would write it for her, I'm sure she will come back one day and she will find it to be a mistake blaming you for her departure.

    Iheartchuu. 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marcus

    I really like this one
    it flowed right
    and I like the rhyme pattern u used
    it made the poem more enjoyable