Wow, truly written greatly.
you put down many of my feelings that i have toward a so called friend now... you have done a great job expressing the reality of two friends and how it is nothing for one of them.
your words tells me you are truly a great friend as i can feel your pain of this broken friendship and betrayel throughout the poem,
dear, friendship is a big word and what i call this word is "HOLLY" word, cause it is, yet it is shamefull of how some people break the wall of trust with the name of friendship....
great job once again, and i want to write a great quote by a famous author that says "if you betray me once, it is your guilt, but if you betray me twice, it is my fault" what he means it frienship can be re done but it is like a glass, once it breaks, it is not easy to fix..........

This is a really good poem
i going through something exactly like this
i have a hard time trusting people but when i do they always betray me
i cant trust any of my friends, but i just learned to trust only myself
good job 5/5

Wow powerful poem 5/5

Good poem ;] Nice how you put the things that happened on paper! xxx

Great poem it really is great