This is great u r getting better keep up the good work

I LiKE THiS. iT`S G0OD.
C0MMENT&RATE MiNE WHEN U GET THE
CHANCE. THANX.

"I miss the twinkle in your eye"

Wow. This is the one line that I just really fell in love with. Although a sad yet true piece, it was definetly a great poem.

Take care.

It's great .. i like it... good job