"This aint how its sposd to go" (sic) ( = supposed is misspelled in the line.) If it's intentional, this piece should be removed to the slang category.
When you said, "Just give me that droning incantation", it made me chuckle. Reminds me of my strict old folks. I surmise this piece is about a teen asking for her parents' permission to let her, at least, say goodbye to her departing friend, but she was forbidden to. Such prejudices by our parents is understandable sometime, but it's way too much when your "always misunderstood" by them.
Overall, a nicely written piece. Needs help in punctuations, but it's no big deal, I suppose. =]
Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
Marian ****

* wonderful poem.
short, but good.
well done!
take care.
5/5

~Chelsea

*this is good starting piece, you can definatly feel the emotions and frustration throughout the poem. While a bit more of a storyline or description would be enjoyable the poem was still nicely done. Take care!

It was a good piece..I think if you added to it it would be even better though.. Also..when you're writting try to touch it up a bit as far as punctuation and spelling goes...When you use commas, periods, and quotation marks it always helps the flow of the poem...

This is good. I think you could do more on it though. Expand it more.
Overall its good 4/5

|Sarah|

Wow this was really short but to the point which was good. but i gave it 3/5 because it was kind of..just blah and really odd. it kind of didnt make sense. but keep on writing and you'll get better!:]