Comments : Hold me

  • 17 years ago

    by herewithme

    "like when you kissed me and told me you love me,
    this silence is more than I can stand."

    heartbreaking. wait, that doesnt even do it justice. heart-shattering.
    its gorgeous.
    thanks fot the comment =] keep it up
    xx kat

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great poem.....beautifully penned!kp writing!!
    tk care
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem and very deep, makes one think about life as it is and what we must do without, you did a great job,and thanks for your comment, I'm touched,,your friend,, Tracy 5/5