What a beautiful poem.. I really love how you put this in the LOVE section. Most people would put poems with this topic in the sad section.. but I really like it here. Great poem, it flowed well and all that good stuff.. but the word choice was great and it was very deep and emotional. It really gives a off a sense of content and happiness.. i dont know if that's what you are going for, but it gives off a positive feeling. Great job. Keep it up. =]

Aww, this was so sad, and yet so full of love. Excellent choice of words, and once again, an excellent flow.

Wonderful and beautiful.

Aww.. this is soo sweet and soo sad.. i had no idea the ending would be what it was... anyways.. it was a wonderful write.. filled with such strong emotion and great detail.. the flow is perfect as well as the rhyme scheme..

Amazing job. great emotion. 5/5

Good poem

I wish God would grant your return,
so we could share another day,
A million things you've yet to learn,
A million things I need to say

^woww those lines were amazing... im sorry that this happened to you... i love reading your poems, because each of them are so relatable, and different in their own way... great work, and keep it up, 5/5 from me.. thank you for the commentt! :]

Sara

This is filled with vivid details and deep emotion! it's another great poem!! 5/5

GR8... you keep amazing me!!!