How can this not have comments??

"Crimson tears fall from saddened eyes
A heart once pure, now crushed by lies"

Such a well written piece, that couplet was amazing, so much emotion in the words..
5/5
*Gem*

Love the first verse....beautifully written and so sad. 5/5 All the best, Debbie

I really liked it, great imagery and flow and very sad and honest x

Great one.
you have showed a great talent in this poem, i like the way you penned the poem, and also i loved the imagery.
keep it up.
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

This was absoluetly beautiful
wow..loved the intense imagery
great work and you are so talented in writing
never give it up!
take care
Lisa:)