Thats rilli good well done :) <3 xx

Excellent poem. beautiful writting. its so tragic and sad. ='[ *tear* 5/5 all the way. =]

Deep...
u manage 2 do it shorter, mi tink 1 of ior bests, the "music" uas grate likalot!!!

Wow this is a good poem. i liked it a lot

One of my Favorite poems. Great job 5/5 :)