4/5 it was a really cute poem. i know the feeling and it wasnt anything exagerated or way out there, it was simple and well presented. the flow wasnt the greatest but everything else was. =] good job.

I think this poem is a bueaty in itself. I twas well written, and nicely pinned, but the flow was a little off, still great job. You are very talented

It wasn`t absolutely great . It kind of seemed like you were rhyming a couple times, and then stopping, which really bugged me . It kind of threw the flow off, but it was good . It wasn`t too ... um ... exaggerated ? But I could really relate to the feeling expressed(:
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5/5 it is soo cute. :) you really put the emotion into a short poem and with beautiful words. it really worked.

i really liked your last stanza
"Please don't break my heart,
I don't think it could take anymore.
Just be true to me
And I'll be true to you"

:)

I absolutely love this poem

That was an top piece of work, some of the rhyming seemed a little forced at times, but apart from that, top job it was excellent, i understood you feeling of the person being your one and truly and how you didnt want to be hurt by them, i know how it feels to love someone and to pray and hope against hope that you aren't hurt by them, so yeas.. you really got the message across... 5/5

So simple and yet ellagenat(Sp?) at the same time.. I really loved the letter format its usually much easier to see people emotions when they write letters like this. The last two lines were my favorite.. very flat out and to the point yet they stood out emensely (sp?) nice job.