Comments : Why Cant It Be Me

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    This is an amazing poem.
    The flow was really nice =]
    well done! 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

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    As a teardrop runs down my cheek
    I realize how such feelings pain me
    These words that I dare not speak
    Are the ones that are going to drain me

    My absolute favorite stanza . It jumped out at me, seriously, because this is how I used to feel back when I still believed in love . It was well written, holding on with emotion and gets the message through without being a bore . I loved it (:
    ..__MiNDYY