Comments : Changing is Difficult

  • 17 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    Love it :D, 5 star!

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey hun,
    Well i did really enjoy reading that poem, and i think you deserved to win! :) (Lol know i can comment on people's work again).
    Anyways now the poem, you went back to hardly using punctuation! Lol, it could of been improved if you had. And yes i know i seem to be obsessed with punctuation usage. Im weird like that. Anyways the poem was really sad and really heartfelt. I like the end of it;
    "Changing is difficult
    Words are too"
    I ust think that concludes the poem brilliantly. And yes changing is difficult. The flow of the poem was good, it had a good steady rhythem. An excellent read! Keep wrtiing hun, i love your work! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The message behind that poem, was something, that iI can relate too. You have alot of talent, and I like your poems. The one also has a good flow, and is well pinned, with an excellnt show of emtions. 5/5 I know I sound like a broken record but I don't know what tot say except if I liked it or not. I try to give an honest cmment.