Hey really good poem you should definatley keep up writting. wow 5/5. *shay*

LAURiE LAURiE LAURiE LAURiE !
& you say you aren`t good at writing poetry .
MY ARSE, sweetiee ` . I admit, I wasn`t a big fan of you`r other poems but THiS WAS GOOD (: Slight editing in that one stanza that`s shorter than the others, but still really good . You little liar, you . ;P
I love it .
..__MiNDYY

Now ? It`s Perfection (:

This is really good, I like it a lot!!
5/5

Some parts couldve had more emotion, but overall it was good.

the plot was really good, but i feel like u couldve executed it better.

tho i will say it was worth the read.

nice job
love ya lots,
~sore