This is such a playful poem, I thought. The repetition worked really well in this. Rhyming worked well, and the flow was great too. An enjoyable read. =] 5/5

Tammie

A nice tasteful one! =)
I loved the rhyme scheme you used with this, an abaC scheme.
Nicely done indeed.
5/5 sweets
*gem*

Nice one. Its provocative, yet it tells the truth about your feelings and thoughts and actions in a very intimate moment.

I like this poem its very intoxicating lol ...well great job 5/5