Comments : Vanished Without A Trace

  • 16 years ago

    by BlAcK RoSe

    Another good poem i like your type of writing
    well done

    BlAcK RoSe

    please comment on mine
    an vote thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    A hertfelt poem, nicely pennned .its real talent to write fiction with such real feelings.

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved the last stanza in this, it was so sad but such a beautiful read.
    As always, you did a fantastic job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very good writing. You have a way of being able to write about anything. Great job!

    It feels like forever
    Since I last saw your face
    There's no way to contact you
    Vanished without a trace

    This just brought it all together.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    A poem from the heart. Very good. nicely pinned and good flow. I really like your style. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "It feels like forever
    Since I last saw your face
    There's no way to contact you
    Vanished without a trace"

    Your fictional write-ups are brilliantly written in a way that makes the reader feel the emotions--so real. A lovely poem, ma'dear. You never cease to enchant me by your wonderful works. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Yes, love does have a way of consuming us when deep in our hearts we know the answer. Another enjoyable poem.

    PS: I've been searching for a topic to write about and you just inspired me with this poem.