Wonderful poem dear, so true there are many girls who feel this way.The last stanza was brilliant , its not the outer beauty but the inner beauty thats makes a person beautiful.

Take care
chavii.

Well if i was born beautifull id be happy too but i look in the mirror and sometimes scare myself lol :) its a poem that i know many people will be able to relate too and mostly girls :))

Gem
Life would be so much easier if we all thought this way. Good job!

I was born beautiful...
Everyone is born this way
We have all been so naive
We are all born beautiful
It's not something we achieve

I loved your ending.
Take Care Cindy

This is good poem, and it is so true of life. Good write

Okay yes the poem could have been better but let me tell you when I got to the last line I was really sad because it made me feel good. Make sense? I liked that message: Gives me hope :) Thank you!

This is cute. It simply serves as a principal inspirition--not only for girls--but for everyone else who has a low self-esteem. (Like moi! lol) I believe everyone is wonderfully and FEARFULLY made indeed. =P I like this poem very muchly! bravo... bravo... bravo! =]
Love,
Debbie

Writers Block??? I thought that was a great poem. Sure we all may think this from time to time. But its inner beauty that counts and you obviously have that as expressed through your poems. And your picture shows you are a beautiful woman, so obviously this poem doesn't apply to you.
Excellent write. Good luck in the contest.

That poem was beautiful. lol. it really was. very inspirational. awesome job. 5/5

Thanks for the comment! By the way, this poem is amazing! I love the ending. It has a ton of meeting and not a type of poem you hear often. Really enjoyed it!
~Love and Trust~

Even with writer's block, m'dear, you still write well. Good luck in my contest!

5/5
~Stephen White

Wow i kne fom the start that there would be a twist as i now know your individual style wow so true and so real your an inspiration to young ladies hun :D if i were your mum id be proud :D

xxx alex xxx

Wow... such a true poem!
What i love about you is that you know it all and know how to express it!!!