Keep writing! You make very great points here!

"to get away from this place so called life"

I think when you get to this point in life where you seem to be in the gutter life isnt all its cracked up to be. You start to notice alot more negative things about it. Everyone feels at times that they want to escape, that they want to run away and leave the world behind. I sure know I've felt that way. Eventually the bad things pass, there seems to be a light at the end of every tunnel somehow, just somehow. Really loved this poem. Take Care